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the scent of wet fur
huddled close in the dark storm
fine red umbrella

-Electric Gryphon

P#16887 2015-11-22 13:42 ( Edited 2017-09-13 19:29)

:: JTE

It's actually one of those li'l toothpick umbrellas isn't it. X3

P#16892 2015-11-22 18:05 ( Edited 2015-11-22 23:05)

This is very lovely

P#16893 2015-11-22 18:16 ( Edited 2015-11-22 23:16)
:: impbox

wow! that's beautiful! :3

P#16898 2015-11-22 19:24 ( Edited 2015-11-23 00:24)
:: JTE

Be sure to put "p8jam1" in the topic's tags section so that it shows up in the list with the rest of them. :o

P#16958 2015-11-24 07:49 ( Edited 2015-11-24 13:40)

Thanks for the reminder JTE! Done and done.

P#16981 2015-11-24 13:07 ( Edited 2015-11-24 18:07)

So charming & nice haiku!

P#17244 2015-11-30 04:04 ( Edited 2015-11-30 09:04)
:: jihem

One word : poetic :)

P#17302 2015-11-30 15:03 ( Edited 2015-11-30 20:03)
:: NuSan

Prety cool scene

P#17317 2015-12-01 07:35 ( Edited 2015-12-01 12:35)
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The scene so small in scale reminds us that there is a world, there are whole ecosystems, underneath our feet, in places we never think to look, because to see would require us to get onto our knees, to dirty ourselves in the muck we have come to see ourselves as superior to, instead preferring hard, sanitary, unyielding concrete. And so we miss the lives of the minuscule because we lack the necessary imagination to think that there could be something worth investigating, something fascinating, in the places too dirty, too hard to fit into, too inconvenient to observe.

P#17349 2015-12-01 11:39 ( Edited 2015-12-01 16:39)

Hi Pineapple, that's exquisite prose. Thanks for the comment.

P#17370 2015-12-01 18:00 ( Edited 2015-12-01 23:00)

Wonderful mood in this scene. I especially like the expanding rings and animated reflection.

P#17430 2015-12-03 04:37 ( Edited 2015-12-03 09:37)

Ha, this is a cute scene. And the artwork is excellent.

P#17448 2015-12-03 11:56 ( Edited 2015-12-03 16:56)

Beautiful. The grass is particularly engaging.

P#17540 2015-12-05 20:28 ( Edited 2015-12-06 01:28)

Very, very beautiful. I included it in my Pico-8 Jam #1 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHEiGl10Aw8

P#17652 2015-12-10 04:33 ( Edited 2015-12-10 09:34)
:: DR4IG

Excellent scene, Excellent Haiku.

P#44154 2017-09-13 15:29 ( Edited 2017-09-13 19:29)

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