Hello everyone,

I'm second year Japanese university student exploring game design.
This is my first time to make game.
My teacher introduced us to Mboffin's tutorial:
https://mboffin.itch.io/pico-8-top-down-adventure-game-tutorial
This is my remix.

I would appreciate any constructive comments.

I would like to make more games.

thank you very mach

初めて作ったゲームであり、P8のプログラムもよくわかっていなかったためにてこずりました。
remixが完成できてよかったです。今度はまた違ったゲームも作っていきたいです。

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Very good first attempt. I particularly like the gameplay, the character sprite, and the music.

Love it! Excellent sprite work! Great job. :D You asked for constructive comments. Maybe a sign next to the first time you come across breakable blocks to help the player know which kinds of blocks are breakable? Or different kinds of axes for different kinds of breakable blocks? Again, great job. :D

I love this game! Since you asked for constructive criticism, I feel that the music gets annoying after a while. Sorry for my bad Japanese, I'm using a translator.

私はこのゲームが大好きです 建設的な批判を求められたので、しばらくすると音楽がイライラしてくるような気がします。日本語が下手くそでごめんなさい、翻訳機を使っています。