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Hello everyone,

I am Red Rabbit Horse.
I am a second year Japanese university student exploring game design.
This is my first time making a game.
My teacher introduced us to MBoffin's tutorial:
https://mboffin.itch.io/pico-8-top-down-adventure-game-tutorial
This is my remix.

I would appreciate any constructive comments.

Thank you very much.

少し目がチカチカしますが、お許しください。
トラップ多めです。

P#79381 2020-07-16 03:32 ( Edited 2020-07-20 02:28)

Good job on your first game.

First thing I would work on is the visuals, everything is very bright and intrusive and it's hard to tell what things are supposed to be. Besides that it was a nice, short game with some challenging but fun obstacles.

P#79466 2020-07-16 23:47

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