My first time trying to make a song in any program somewhat seriously. Did this in a I think 2~3 hrs.
I messed with visual too much after a few iterations of the idea XD.

Thoughts on the song?

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(Small update slowed down slightly)

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Cleaned up some. Still looking for some ideas. Likely will redo from scratch next time.

I like it! I'm getting a visual of a slowly falling star, in something like a paper mario or earthbound-style game. For a first song it's great, might want to expand the duration about 4x next time though.

You could maybe try a more melodic piece next, as most of what you have here is the atmosphere and harmonic fills? That's usually how I pad out the length of my own songs, haha.